http://antonus.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] antonus.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hoddion 2011-11-07 04:21 am (UTC)

Очень вольно сделано и рифмы небрежны (вроссыпь/откосы). В целом же похоже...
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